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I'm writing a story about a royal family. These are the names I've come up with:Loveday (the good princess)
Phyllis (the bad princess)
Florence (the Queen)
Peter (the King)
Lois (the Queen's sister)
Emmeline (the maid)WDYT?
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I think the maid's name sounds the most royal of them all...
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I love the names! The only problem I see is Loveday. I don't think it's too out there, but I do think it's very cliche (the good character having a name with the word love in it). If you're going for that kind of obviousness though, it's fine.(I hope that didn't come off as mean! D:)

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Loveday seems a bit out there
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Loveday is the oddball compared to all the other vintage names you have in there. What about Liza, Veronica or Annabella. Something more classic but princessy at the same time.
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I think they're great, but Emmeline sounds too "princess-y" to be used for a maid, unless you plan on having her be like Cinderella.
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