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Ellery, Tyler, Jackson and Christopher don't work together super well in my opinion. Tyler on a girl seems very random in this set, so unless there's a reason given for it in the story, that would REALLY bother me as a reader. Taylor wouldn't matter, but Tyler is a bolder, rare choice and it sticks out. Christopher on the other hand stands out as a choice that seems too conventional/uninspired for a family that named their daughters Ellery and Tyler. So either Tyler or Christopher needs some reasoning to back it up. Or, both. Or you should tone down Ellery and Tyler, or spruce up Christopher. In typical middle child fashion I don't even notice Jackson, lol.