I like it quite a bit. It's Biblical and old-fashioned but doesn't sound stuffy or stale, and it's not "weird" or too unusual, imo.
I think of
Dinah Shore and "Someone's in the kitchen with
Dinah..." from whatever song that is. :b Not bad associations, though. :)
~
Heather~
"Why is it that, as a culture, we are more comfortable seeing two men holding guns than holding hands?" -
Ernest Gaines